Question by loves 2 write!: new story idea for a teen drama/ mystery/ suspense. tell me if you think it is a good idea?
Okay so I posted this earlier but I just came up with a new twist tell me what you think:
Abbie(mc) is a 16 year old girl who lost both her parents in am accident when she was 2. She was taken in by her aunt Selene who then when abbie is 12 has a baby with a man who abuses her and once the baby is born he leaves and she goes into a depression by the time the baby(chloe) is a year old Selene has a drinking problem and is constantly drunk. Abbie now takes care of Chloe most of the time. Now that Abbie is 16 and chloe is 4 abbie hates her life being with selene is torture and she has no time to attempt to make friendsb/c of Chloe. she doesn’tknow what to do anymore.
switch cities and we r now listening to the story of Abbie’s parents who never really died but their deaths were faked by a criminal who now holds them captive while the rest of the world thinks them to be dead
It would switch every few chapters between Abbie and her parents. so what do you think? tell me if you think its a good idea and if you have anything to add to it tell me! thx!
srry i meant to say she was 12 when her parents died. o and it could be possible fo r her parents to be held that long have nt you been watching the news about the girl who was kidnapped 19 years ago!
o and the other ages get switched around a bit like chloe turns a year old when abbie is 14 instead of 12 srry I copy and pasted this from my earlier question and forgot to do some editing after my addition to the plot
Answer by Steph
How have these criminals kept Abbie’s parents captive for 14 years without anyone finding out about it? What were the circumstances surrounding their alleged death? It would have to be some incredible accident for there to be no evidence whatsoever of their bodies afterwards, but to still have authorities believe that the two were actually involved.
What other adults are involved in this story? I’d have a hard time believing that Child Protective Services wouldn’t get involved if Selene is indeed an alcoholic who depends upon Abbie to care for Chloe.
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